Very nice.....if I may I would like to comment
You used the gradient for her hair I think if you gave her hair more a shine by drawing it in...that would have looked better
the chain going from her nose to her ear I think you could have magnified it and gave it more detail to look more like a chain or jewelry...would have looked great the bright color yellow kinda gets lost on her face :/
some of the colors on this hurts the eye of course this is just my rough opinion...
I do see you put alot of work into this its very lovely
by giving her the clothe on her head you cut off her shoulders... or did you intend to do this?
((((((((I think her eyes are just fabulous )))))))))
also another hint I found if you save your image in illustrator under the default settings for GIF you keep the vibrant colors
but messing with any AI file in PS you lose alot of that vibrant color :/
I my self am still learning illustrator so my crit isn't to professional
any hoot I hope you don't take my comments as too rough just pointing out what I see
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I thank you a whole lot for your comments which i think are very constructive

Yeah, i guess i need to remedy to all the details...
Yellow was the colour i thought looked more gold...that's why i used it...
Usually Indian brides wear lots of jewelry and especially gold..

Thanks again

Will change the details when i get enough time..very soon i hope

I have updated the drawing...

I liked them very its new drawings!
I liked of very colors!